英検１級英作文 ChatGPTによる採点(1)
１ １つ目の質問（トピックと英作文の添削をしてもらう）
・自分からの質問
「英検１級の英作文の添削はできますか。」
・ChatGPTからの回答
「もちろん、英検１級の英作文の添削をお手伝いします。ご提出いただける文章を教えていただければ、できる限り添削やアドバイスを提供します。」
・自分からの質問
「英検１級の英作文を以下のように書いたら、何点ぐらいですか？日本語で回答をお願いします。
TOPIC ↓
Agree or disagree: E-learning will become more prevalent in the future
英作文↓
Now people began to use e-learning system to study, and I think more and more people will use it in the future because it is very useful. This is due to benefit of studying paperless, easy accessibility, and being able to grow computer manipulation ability.
First of all, using e-learning system can emancipate people from carrying a lot of heavy textbooks. Everything learners need is in their computers. This makes it easier to learn something for anybody from children to adults.
Secondly, people can learn whenever and wherever they wan if they have their computers. They do not need to go out to se their teachers because all they need is just a computer and the Internet at home. For example, of someone gets sick and does not feel well, he or she can study at his or her own pace at home.
Finally, e-learning helps learners get used to technology. It is easier and faster to look up what they want to know on the Internet than looking up from the books. If young people learn to use computers well, it is likely that it will lead to great productivity in IT field.
In conclusion, I believe e-learning will be more popular in the future. 」
・ChatGPTからの回答
「この英作文は一般的な理由や例を挙げていて、意見を補強している点は良いですが、一部文法や表現に修正が必要な部分があります。以下に添削とコメントを加えました：
Now people have begun to use e-learning systems to study, and I think more and more people will use them in the future because they are very useful. This is due to the benefits of studying paperlessly, easy accessibility, and the ability to enhance computer manipulation skills.
First of all, using e-learning systems can emancipate people from carrying a lot of heavy textbooks. Everything learners need is on their computers, making it easier for anyone, from children to adults, to learn something.
Secondly, people can learn whenever and wherever they want if they have their computers. They do not need to go out to see their teachers because all they need is just a computer and the Internet at home. For example, if someone gets sick and does not feel well, he or she can study at his or her own pace at home.
Finally, e-learning helps learners get used to technology. It is easier and faster to look up what they want to know on the Internet than looking it up in books. If young people learn to use computers well, it is likely that it will lead to great productivity in the IT field.
In conclusion, I believe e-learning will be more popular in the future.
主な修正点：
「Now people began to use」 → 「Now people have begun to use」
「more and more people will use it」 → 「more and more people will use them」（e-learning systems は複数形）
「benefit of studying paperless」 → 「benefits of studying paperlessly」
「computer manipulation ability」 → 「computer manipulation skills」
「learners need is in their computers」 → 「learners need is on their computers」
「anybody from children to adults」 → 「anyone, from children to adults」
「they wan」 → 「they want」
「go out to se their teachers」 → 「go out to see their teachers」
「look up from the books」 → 「look it up in books」
文章の流れをよりスムーズにするために、一部の文を修正しました。」
２ ２つ目の質問（何点になるかを教えてもらう）
・自分からの質問
「英検１級の英作文を以下のように書いたら、何点ぐらいですか？日本語で回答をお願いします。内容、構成、語彙、文法、総合得点を教えてください。各項目が８点満点で採点され、合計３２点です。 」 （１で指摘された修正点は修正せずにそのまま送信しました。）
TOPIC ↓
Agree or disagree: E-learning will become more prevalent in the future
英作文↓
Now people began to use e-learning system to study, and I think more and more people will use it in the future because it is very useful. This is due to benefit of studying paperless, easy accessibility, and being able to grow computer manipulation ability.
First of all, using e-learning system can emancipate people from carrying a lot of heavy textbooks. Everything learners need is in their computers. This makes it easier to learn something for anybody from children to adults.
Secondly, people can learn whenever and wherever they wan if they have their computers. They do not need to go out to se their teachers because all they need is just a computer and the Internet at home. For example, of someone gets sick and does not feel well, he or she can study at his or her own pace at home.
Finally, e-learning helps learners get used to technology. It is easier and faster to look up what they want to know on the Internet than looking up from the books. If young people learn to use computers well, it is likely that it will lead to great productivity in IT field.
In conclusion, I believe e-learning will be more popular in the future.
・ChatGPTからの回答
「提供された英作文に対する評価は以下の通りです：
内容 (Content): 7/8
論点が明確で、e-learningの利点について具体的な例を挙げています。ただし、一部の主張が十分に詳細でないため、もう少し展開が望まれます。
構成 (Organization): 8/8
各段落が一貫しており、論理的な構成があります。特に導入と結論の部分がしっかりしています。
語彙 (Vocabulary): 7/8
十分に理解できる語彙が使われていますが、もう少し多様性があればより良いでしょう。同じ表現が繰り返されている箇所があります。
文法 (Grammar): 7/8
ほとんどの文は文法的に正確ですが、いくつかの文が少し不自然な表現になっているため、修正が必要です。
総合得点 (Overall Score): 29/32
提供された英作文はかなり良好なもので、内容と構成が堅実です。一部、語彙や文法に改善の余地がありますが、総合的には高い得点です。」
３ ChatGPTに採点をしてもらっての感想
・英文を打ち込むのは時間がかかりますが、回答が一瞬で返ってくるので驚きま す。
・文法のミスやスペルミスは正確に把握することができます。
・採点はあまめなのかなぁ？もっと低くなると思いましたが、意外と得点が高かったです。自分が書いた英作文には、文法やスペルミスが多かったので、語彙と文法それぞれの項目で１点だけの減点だけで済むのかな？と思いました。
・それぞれの項目ごとにコメントが添えられているので、英作文の良い部分や自分の弱点を客観的に知ることができました。