7日の話題
2年前夫がゴルフを始めた。私はたまに一緒に練習場に行っていた。昨日遂にゴルフに行った。何でこんなに時間が空いたかというと、朝5時に家を出て、6時間ゴルフをして、帰ってきても、その後疲れてしまうと思ったからだ。そして実際そうだった。何もできなかった。午前中太陽の光を浴びたからだろう。夏にゴルフをするものではない。
本当に疲れたが、本当に楽しかった！

英作文
My husband started playing golf 2 years ago.
I sometimes went to the place for practices together.
At last, I went golfing yesterday. Why did I take time? Because I left my house at 5, and I played golf for 6 hours, and I went home, I expected that it would be tiring. And it was true. I couldn't do anything. Maybe it was because I was under the sun all through the morning. Should not to play golf in summer.
I got so tired, but I was really excited!

正解
My husband started playing golf 2 years ago.
I sometimes went to the place for practices together.
At last, I went golfing yesterday. Why did it take so long for me to play the real game? Because it's tiring. I had to leave my house at 5 in the morning yesterday, and I played golf for 6 hours, and I came home at tree o'clock in the afternoon, I expected that it would be tiring. And it was true. I couldn't do anything after I came back. Maybe it was because I was under the sun all through the morning. I don't think that you should play golf in summer.
I got exhausted, but I was really excited!

A:Why did I take time?→Why did it take so long for me to play the real game?この場合あまりIを主語にして使わない。

Why で聞いたのに、Because以下が理由になっていなくて、事実の羅列なので、Because it's tiring.と言ってから。

Should not to play golf in summer.主語がない。→I don't think that you should play golf in summer.夏にはゴルフすべきではない。

〜ではないと思う。×　〜だとは思わない。⚪︎

tired→exhausted/tiring→exhaustingめっちゃ疲れた、へとへとだ。