13日の話題
チェックしてもらったけれど、話題を広げることができなかった。だから昨日聞いたニュースを日記にしようと思う。
歌手の友人が亡くなったと聞いた。51歳だったそうだ。
彼は敬虔なクリスチャンだった。Pencil Bunchというゴスペルコーラスグループを率いていた。
私は昨年まで参加していたSinging In the Parkというコーラスグループと、何度かジョイントコンサートをしたことがある。一緒に歌うと、彼らのゴスペルへの情熱にいつも圧倒されたものだ。
彼らとの出会いは、私たちがゴスペルを歌うという事を考えさせてくれた。信仰なしには歌えないジャンルだった。
麗王さん、どうか安らかに。

英作文
Since I was checked diary yesterday by Atchan, I couldn't develop the topic. So I write the diary that I heard the news yesterday.
I heard that my friend, a singer, Leo was dead. He was 51 years old.
He was a sincere Christian. He headed the Gospel chorus group "Pencil Bunch".
I was in the chorus group "Singing In the Park" until last year. We have had joint concert with them several times. When I sang with them, I used to be overwhelmed by passion for Gospel.
So I met them, it made me think to sing Gospel. It was difficult to sing without faith to me.
Please rest in peace, Leo.

正解
Yesterday. I had Atchan check my diary. I was asked to talk about something. I didn't really know what to say or how to expand or develop the story.
So I wrote about the news that I heard yesterday.
I heard that my friend, a singer, Leo was dead. He was 51 years old.
He was a sincere Christian. He headed the Gospel chorus group called "Pencil Bunch".
I was in the chorus group "Singing In the Park" until last year. We've had the joint concerts with them several times. When I sang with them, I used to be overwhelmed by the passion for Gospel.
So, it made me think that it was difficult for Japanese to sing Gospel without faith.
Please rest in peace, Leo.