4日の話題
8/31は結婚記念日だった。以前から行きたいと思っていたフレンチレストランが飯田橋にあって、そこのランチを予約して行った。ソンブルイユというお店だ。私の先輩の旦那さんがそこの支配人をしているのだ。
支配人の高野さんはソムリエで、美味しいワインをよく知っている。今回、乾杯のシャンパンはサービスしてくれて、全ての料理に合うワインを出してくれた。全て美味しかった！先輩から、と言ってお花まで頂いた。
本当にお腹がいっぱいで、酔っ払いながら2人で家に帰った。素敵な1日だった。

英作文
August 31st is our 4th wedding anniversary. A French restaurant that I've wanted to visit is in Iidabashi. We made a reservation. The restaurant is called Sombreuil. My senior friend during the time of school, Tomosan, her husband is a manager there.
The manager, Mr.Takano is a sommelier, He knows about wine very well.
This time, he gave us the first champagne for free. And he served us many glasses of wine that suits each dish. The dishes and wine were all delicious!
Mr.Takano gave me a bouquet and said "from Tomosan."
We became full. and we were drunk and came home.
We had a really great time!

正解
August 31st is our 4th wedding anniversary. A French restaurant that I've wanted to visit is in Iidabashi. We made a reservation. The restaurant is called Sombreuil. The manager of the place is a husband of my friend, Tomosan, who used to go to the same school.
The manager, Mr.Takano is a sommelier, he knows about wine very well.
This time, he gave us the first champagne for free. And he served us many glasses of wine that suits each dish. The dishes and wine were all delicious!
Mr.Takano gave me a bouquet and said "From Tomosan."
We became full. And we were drunk and came home.
We had a really great time!