24日の話題
この20年は月一で美容室に行っている。
23歳の時麻布のレストランで働いていた。そこは昼から真夜中まで開いてる店で、私はランチの時間に働いていた。友達のたまちゃんはそこで夜働いていた。彼女はそこで働きながら美容師になる勉強をしていた。私たちは20年の友達だ。
20年の間には、彼女は結婚し、旦那さんと恵比寿に自分たちのお店を出し、お母さんになった。
私も結婚した。
今では月一で夫と一緒にそこへ通っている。

英作文
I have cut and dye my hair once a month for 20 years.
When I was 23 years old, I worked at the restaurant in Azabu.
The place was opened from afternoon to midnight. I worked at lunchtime.
My friend, Tamachan worked there at dinnertime. She worked there and studied to be a hairdresser.
We've been friends for 20 years.
During that 20 years, she got married, opened the own beauty palor with her husband in Ebisu and became a mother.
I also got married.
And now, I have cut and dye my hair their palor once a month with my husband.

正解
I have my hair cut and dyed once a month for the past 20 years.
When I was 23 years old, I worked at the restaurant in Azabu.
The place was opened from afternoon to midnight. I worked at lunchtime.
My friend, Tamachan worked there at dinnertime. She worked there and was studying to be a hairdresser.
We've been friends for 20 years.
During those 20 years, she got married, opened the own beauty palor with her husband in Ebisu and became a mother.
I also got married.
And now, I have my hair cut and dyed their palor once a month. So does my husband.