１　１つ目の質問（英作文の添削をしてもらう）

・自分からの質問
「英検１級の英作文を以下のように書きました。添削とアドバイスをお願いします。

Topic↓
Agree or disagree:  Food shortages will be eliminated in the future

英作文↓
     In some countries, food shortages are problem.  I do not think the problem will be solved easily in the future, due to rise in population, unstable eco system, and constantly repeated wars.
     First of all, human population has been rising around the world.  It is said eight billion people live on the earth.  Furthermore, the population will keep increasing in the future.  Filling the increasing stomachs will be more difficult.
     Second, the earth is facing unstable eco system because of global warming.  This means more and more creatures will be endangered.  If endangered species are to increase, food shortages will be inevitable.
     Finally, wars have been repeated throughout history.  As it is obvious, wars destroy the environment.  For example, atomic bombs and ballistic missiles could overwhelmingly influence on people, animals, and nature.
     Scientists have been trying to create new types of food which do not need a lot of consumption of living things.  However, for these reasons above, I do not believe food shortages will be eliminated in the future.」

・ChatGPTからの回答
「Your essay provides a reasonable argument against the elimination of food shortages in the future. However, there are a few areas where you can enhance clarity, coherence, and grammar. Here are some suggested revisions:

1. Introduction: "In some countries, food shortages are a significant problem. I do not believe this issue will be easily resolved in the future, given the rise in population, an unstable ecosystem, and the persistent occurrence of wars."

2. First Paragraph: "First of all, the global human population has been steadily rising, with approximately eight billion people currently inhabiting the Earth. Furthermore, projections indicate that the population will continue to increase in the future, making it increasingly challenging to meet the growing demand for food."

3. Second Paragraph: "Secondly, the Earth is experiencing an unstable ecosystem, primarily due to global warming. This instability poses a threat to various species, with an increasing number facing endangerment. The rise in endangered species will inevitably contribute to food shortages."

4. Third Paragraph: "Lastly, wars have been a recurring theme throughout history, and their destructive impact on the environment is evident. For instance, the deployment of atomic bombs and ballistic missiles can have overwhelming consequences on people, animals, and nature as a whole."

5. Conclusion: "In conclusion, despite ongoing efforts by scientists to develop new types of food that require minimal consumption of living resources, the combined challenges of a rising population, an unstable ecosystem, and the destructive impact of wars lead me to believe that food shortages will persist in the future."

6. General Tips:

   • Ensure subject-verb agreement (e.g., "food shortages are a problem" instead of "food shortages are problem").

   • Check punctuation and sentence structure for better flow.

   • Clarify the connection between points to enhance the overall coherence of the essay.

These adjustments should help improve the overall clarity and effectiveness of your essay.」

２　２つ目の質問（何点になるかを教えてもらう。）

・自分からの質問
「英検１級の英作文を以下のように書いたら、何点ぐらいですか？日本語で回答をお願いします。内容、構成、語彙、文法、総合得点を教えてください。各項目が８点満点で採点され、合計３２点です。

Topic↓
Agree or disagree:  Food shortages will be eliminated in the future

英作文↓
     In some countries, food shortages are problem.  I do not think the problem will be solved easily in the future, due to rise in population, unstable eco system, and constantly repeated wars.
     First of all, human population has been rising around the world.  It is said eight billion people live on the earth.  Furthermore, the population will keep increasing in the future.  Filling the increasing stomachs will be more difficult.
     Second, the earth is facing unstable eco system because of global warming.  This means more and more creatures will be endangered.  If endangered species are to increase, food shortages will be inevitable.
     Finally, wars have been repeated throughout history.  As it is obvious, wars destroy the environment.  For example, atomic bombs and ballistic missiles could overwhelmingly influence on people, animals, and nature.
     Scientists have been trying to create new types of food which do not need a lot of consumption of living things.  However, for these reasons above, I do not believe food shortages will be eliminated in the future.」

・ChatGPTからの回答

「日本語での評価は主観的であり、また具体的な採点基準が提示されていないため、正確な評価が難しいですが、一般的な意見を述べます。

内容（8点満点）: 5点

• 良い点: 問題提起が明確で、それを裏付けるための要因が述べられている。

• 改善の余地: もう少し詳細な例や具体的な情報を加えると、論点がより強化されるでしょう。

構成（8点満点）: 4点

• 良い点: 導入、主題の提示、理由の列挙、結論の流れがある。

• 改善の余地: 各段落間の論理的なつながりや移行がもう少しスムーズになるように工夫すると良いです。

語彙（8点満点）: 4点

• 良い点: 基本的な語彙が使用されており、理解可能。

• 改善の余地: より多様で適切な語彙の導入や表現力の向上が望まれます。

文法（8点満点）: 4点

• 良い点: 基本的な文法規則には従っている。

• 改善の余地: 文の構造や文法のバリエーションを増やし、複雑な構文を導入すると、より高い評価が期待できます。

総合得点: 17点（32点満点）

改善点を踏まえつつ、例や具体的な情報を加え、語彙や文法の幅を広げると、より充実したエッセイになるでしょう。」

３　ChatGPTに採点をしてもらっての振り返り

・３回目は英語での回答をもらった。
・人が変わったかのように採点が厳しくなった！？（１回目、２回目は採点が甘く感じた。）
・「具体的な評価基準が提示されていない」とのこと。１回目、２回目は適当に採点されてたんかい？