What visions from bathos-well*1 of cool mouth or warm chest, could human drink; if the poets could only know.
 immanent light and shades in hidden melodies' sphere,
sent burnishing liquid-silver's quickened flighty pace; and in the Air,
all melancholy-woven and versified, immortal souls' yells.

冷たい口や温かい胸のベイソス*1の井戸から、人間はどんな幻の光景を見ることができるのか；
詩人たちがそれを知りさえすれば。
隠されたメロディーの天球に内在する光と影、
銀の液体を燃やし、飛翔の速度を速める；
そして、憂鬱に織りなされ、詩化された空気の中で、
不滅の魂の叫び。

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Jurek Kirakowski
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lovely lyrical lines. Do you really need the commas after "chest" and "sphere"?

Guomin Ye
Author
yeah, it is used to mark a phonetic break when you read it out loud. or just a sudden change of tone or flow of consciousness. the poem occurs to me this way.

It has Chinese prosodic influence https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kish%C5%8Dtenketsu　but i come up with my own prosodic rules.

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